tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post1889261789086555779..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: Another Concrete PoemJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-29611179902715750632011-07-20T16:00:23.402-07:002011-07-20T16:00:23.402-07:00Beth,
Thank you for taking the time to come by and...Beth,<br />Thank you for taking the time to come by and check out the concrete poems. They are fun to write. Try your own. Some people consider William Carlos Williams' poem THE RED WHEELBARROW, a concrete poem because each stanza looks like a little wheelbarrow. <br />Keep having fun and writing. <br />Thanks for the comment.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-69712224761267518482011-07-20T11:10:16.568-07:002011-07-20T11:10:16.568-07:00So NOW I know what a concrete poem is. Thanks for ...So NOW I know what a concrete poem is. Thanks for the cool illustration. I'm not sure if my blog would take this shape either. I must try it sometime. <br /><br />I plan to follow you now. Such fun! Loved the snake poem, too. :)<br /><br />http://www.banterwithbeth.blogspot.comBethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16685726789687443442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-17254125601012676822011-07-17T10:22:27.372-07:002011-07-17T10:22:27.372-07:00Thanks David,
This is getting to be fun. Have ...Thanks David,<br /> This is getting to be fun. Have you heard of my diabolical plan to encourage everyone to submit concrete poems for your next WOW Challenge (Word of the Month)? <br /> This poem is presented flush left with spaces and some lines removed on Children's poet David Harrison's blog at http://www.davidlharrison.wordpress.com <br /><br />Look for his adult WOW challenge. this month's word is SOUR.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-13283228157374704552011-07-14T09:27:48.620-07:002011-07-14T09:27:48.620-07:00Joy,
I like this a lot and am sorry that my blog ...Joy,<br /><br />I like this a lot and am sorry that my blog package can't seem to get it about shaped poems. No matter how hard I try, everything slides flush left.<br /><br />DavidAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-4672672235102037962011-07-12T05:40:25.064-07:002011-07-12T05:40:25.064-07:00Hi Joy,
Hmm. Is the parade literal or figurative...Hi Joy,<br /><br />Hmm. Is the parade literal or figurative? Oh, I know the reader must decide for himself/herself. Right?<br /><br />Linda A.Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.com