tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post4290197354090887285..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: Coyote FibJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-54105397791687166782013-03-04T14:28:20.583-08:002013-03-04T14:28:20.583-08:00Congratulations Linda,
You are the winner of the...Congratulations Linda,<br /> You are the winner of the drawing for the rhyming picture book by Charline Profiri GUESS WHO'S IN THE DESERT. Please contact me at joyacey@gmail.com for instructions on how to receive your book.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-46617070158713203492013-03-02T19:30:10.934-08:002013-03-02T19:30:10.934-08:00I love your reverso fib. Fun! And I met Charline a...I love your reverso fib. Fun! And I met Charline at Chautauqua years ago--such a lovely person. This book sounds like fun!laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-9307663618859143452013-03-02T17:25:09.942-08:002013-03-02T17:25:09.942-08:00Thanks for teaching me about the FIB - I'm goi...Thanks for teaching me about the FIB - I'm going to try one soon!<br /><br />I'm in suburbia and coyotes are snatching up housecats and small dogs left outdoors. Sad all the way around, especially because we are crowding them out of their natural habitat.Cathy Ballou Mealeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07925815654400078026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-66540910423872642402013-03-02T17:00:50.503-08:002013-03-02T17:00:50.503-08:00Clever. Enjoy every minute of your life in the des...Clever. Enjoy every minute of your life in the desert or wherever you happen to be. I love coyotes. They are pretty smart.<br />Never Give Up<br />Joan Y. EdwardsJoan Y. Edwardshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03346512397339463586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-81737768740848659812013-03-02T05:17:40.153-08:002013-03-02T05:17:40.153-08:00Hi, Joy. I like your version of the fib very much...Hi, Joy. I like your version of the fib very much. I started using the form with elementary schoolers last year. They love the mystery of the Fibonacci spiral and it's a great exercise for learning how syllables work in a form poem.Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-43467805623495923202013-03-01T18:04:04.689-08:002013-03-01T18:04:04.689-08:00Oh dear, you didn't sign your name. How can I...Oh dear, you didn't sign your name. How can I put your name in the hat? Please leave some way for me to contact you if you should win.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-28438860089338703472013-03-01T17:07:10.421-08:002013-03-01T17:07:10.421-08:00I love to write poetry, but I had never heard of t...I love to write poetry, but I had never heard of the FIB format before. It sounds like something to try. I'd love to win the desert book as my third graders do study the desert environment, flora, fauna, etc...Thanks for the chance to win.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-8460063164921883662013-03-01T12:51:35.593-08:002013-03-01T12:51:35.593-08:00Thanks for your comment, Linda. I was trying to f...Thanks for your comment, Linda. I was trying to figure out which poem I liked better. It is always fun to play with poetry for me. I've entered your name in the drawing, good luck.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-20865560743760378252013-03-01T12:49:53.391-08:002013-03-01T12:49:53.391-08:00Thanks, Linda. I like your blog post today too. ...Thanks, Linda. I like your blog post today too. Good luck in the drawing.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-5755075362657738662013-03-01T12:48:56.586-08:002013-03-01T12:48:56.586-08:00Thanks, Buffy. I forwarded your comment to Charli...Thanks, Buffy. I forwarded your comment to Charline. She will be speaking at the Tucson Festival for the Book next weekend, so she has been very busy.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-91388912328638613492013-03-01T12:47:28.324-08:002013-03-01T12:47:28.324-08:00Matt, Thank you for recognizing what I was trying ...Matt, Thank you for recognizing what I was trying to do. Good Luck in the draw.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-67820636385152872792013-03-01T12:46:31.516-08:002013-03-01T12:46:31.516-08:00Done, Linda. Good Luck. I wish I had enough copi...Done, Linda. Good Luck. I wish I had enough copies to give them to everyone. Do make sure that your library has a copy. This is a very interactive book for kids. Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-78217896718705318622013-03-01T12:44:50.245-08:002013-03-01T12:44:50.245-08:00It's been that kind of week, hasn't it? H...It's been that kind of week, hasn't it? Hope things settle for you, but I think it is like being organized, I'm NEVER organized enough. Good luck in the drawing. I know you'd love examining the art work in this one.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-29782314110886380822013-03-01T12:43:09.812-08:002013-03-01T12:43:09.812-08:00Lynn,
Good Luck, and if you win, I'll perso...Lynn,<br /> Good Luck, and if you win, I'll personally deliver the book. Otherwise, Charline will be at the Tucson Festival for the Book next weekend and you can buy (and see) a copy there. Charline Profiri is making a presentation too. check the schedule.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-80021133150747364712013-03-01T12:23:25.158-08:002013-03-01T12:23:25.158-08:00I like that you're trying different ways to sh...I like that you're trying different ways to show the coyote experience, Joy. I really enjoyed yesterday's, however, because it told more. The book does feel beautiful-love the dessert!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-36206120341987897142013-03-01T10:02:19.916-08:002013-03-01T10:02:19.916-08:00Coyotes take on a great form here. Like it! Plea...Coyotes take on a great form here. Like it! Please enter my name in the drawing too. Thanks! Congratulations to Charline--great book idea. Happy for you!Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-10680865087437772932013-03-01T07:50:46.257-08:002013-03-01T07:50:46.257-08:00Fun poem, Joy--thanks for introducing me to this f...Fun poem, Joy--thanks for introducing me to this form. It works well for your topic, and I like your addition of reversing it. Please pass along my congratulations to Charline--we were in the same online critique group many years ago.Buffy Silvermanhttp://www.buffysilverman.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-25247034020887748722013-03-01T07:14:13.754-08:002013-03-01T07:14:13.754-08:00The form of the poem makes it feel like the coyote...The form of the poem makes it feel like the coyotes are coming then going...good choice!Matt Forrest Esenwinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04230063389130167424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-8549041377000893412013-03-01T06:07:55.808-08:002013-03-01T06:07:55.808-08:00Joy, I love the idea of the FIB poem, having taugh...Joy, I love the idea of the FIB poem, having taught language arts and math during my teaching days. Thanks for the post, and I'll love my name to be dropped in your hat!Linda Phillipshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10838197966070322540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-36393120675133659832013-03-01T06:02:29.087-08:002013-03-01T06:02:29.087-08:00Great post, Joy! Enjoyed your coyote poem and thi...Great post, Joy! Enjoyed your coyote poem and this book looks terrific. Thanks for sharing. (I'm not together enough to attempt a FIB this morning, but I'll try one one of these days...!)Robyn Hood Blackhttp://www.robynhoodblack.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-86374113939494983352013-03-01T05:42:02.144-08:002013-03-01T05:42:02.144-08:00What fun, another charming book by author Charline...What fun, another charming book by author Charline Profiri, and fabulous illustrations by Susan Swan. Growing up in Tucson, I love the desert.<br />Thanks for this opportunity to win one of Charline's books, Joy! Please drop my name in your hat. Love your blog.<br /><br />- Lynn RogalskyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com