tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post4747676749185221450..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: Monday MorningJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-33008073296744608282014-01-25T15:01:04.209-08:002014-01-25T15:01:04.209-08:00Hey, at least they aren't grackles. Now there...Hey, at least they aren't grackles. Now there is a bird I don't particularly like.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-71398623248475532122014-01-24T17:12:37.461-08:002014-01-24T17:12:37.461-08:00I was nervous for the starlings at the end, and I ...I was nervous for the starlings at the end, and I don't even *like* starlings. Good job conveying mood, Joy!Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-32217927134346219502014-01-21T14:55:15.838-08:002014-01-21T14:55:15.838-08:00The poem definitely has a haiku feel, Joy. Have yo...The poem definitely has a haiku feel, Joy. Have you tried it as a tanka poem?Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-35343682292577543222014-01-21T11:06:36.724-08:002014-01-21T11:06:36.724-08:00Joy,
I'm imagining that the hawk cuts across t...Joy,<br />I'm imagining that the hawk cuts across the sky soon too!Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-24051295661071214392014-01-20T16:08:22.856-08:002014-01-20T16:08:22.856-08:00I just wrote a poem about winter, and birds, Joy. ...I just wrote a poem about winter, and birds, Joy. I think we can see the few that are out there much more because of our bare trees. How great to have seen the hawk-so still they are when they watch! I enjoyed your free verse.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com