tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post5249551944820738118..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: SKIPPING ALONGJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-15911508148932779762015-08-11T12:55:27.403-07:002015-08-11T12:55:27.403-07:00Thanks for the encouragement, Linda.Thanks for the encouragement, Linda.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-78290791285016955902015-08-10T06:19:58.706-07:002015-08-10T06:19:58.706-07:00Joy,
I like the first poem better because it remin...Joy,<br />I like the first poem better because it reminds me of "A tisket, a tasket" and dropping poems, lines from poems, etc. I'd suggest changing the ending to reflect a child's excuse, perhaps for cleaning her room, and then send it off to kid magazines.Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-56138058658182192022015-08-08T12:11:23.343-07:002015-08-08T12:11:23.343-07:00Thanks, Mary Lee for the encouragement. We are tr...Thanks, Mary Lee for the encouragement. We are trying to sell our house and so I spent all day yesterday getting ready for a showing. I scrubbed, vacuumed, mopped, dusted, polished, and put everything away. I didn't have much time for poetry until late at night.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-7900215383968087912015-08-08T05:23:12.327-07:002015-08-08T05:23:12.327-07:00Skip on! Don't worry about being late, if it&#...Skip on! Don't worry about being late, if it's for the sake of poetry!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.com