tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post624573515100492152..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: 2015 Progressive PoemJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-32767329395155538372015-04-03T06:50:11.976-07:002015-04-03T06:50:11.976-07:00I'm with everyone else! Loving . . .
"on ...I'm with everyone else! Loving . . .<br />"on her bare feet stick jeweled flecks of dark mica."Penny Parker Klostermannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043861965501388155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-35525429194035200242015-04-03T04:30:05.922-07:002015-04-03T04:30:05.922-07:00Mica on my bare feet! Sticks like glitter, flat t...Mica on my bare feet! Sticks like glitter, flat to your skin and is so hard to get off! I wonder... a short, abrupt line or another long winding one adding to these two exquisite lines...I guess we'll soon see! I have so long to wait! Love this beginning!<br />Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-25759865868133300952015-04-02T15:52:13.443-07:002015-04-02T15:52:13.443-07:00"on her bare feet stick jeweled flecks of dar..."on her bare feet stick jeweled flecks of dark mica" - is that fun or what? Great job, Joy. I like how those words "stick" as we say them - all those hard c/k sounds! Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-71176023837274164262015-04-02T15:12:05.716-07:002015-04-02T15:12:05.716-07:00Oh, I love where this going, and the characters th...Oh, I love where this going, and the characters that are developing (both human and geographical). Looking forward to working on this all evening!Heidi Mordhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09902158336083356337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-82112811952645704652015-04-02T15:09:27.800-07:002015-04-02T15:09:27.800-07:00Love the way it's starting out. Nice imagery, ...Love the way it's starting out. Nice imagery, both of you!Matt Forrest Esenwinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04230063389130167424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-15584993974303364222015-04-02T13:46:43.961-07:002015-04-02T13:46:43.961-07:00Excellent images, Joy! But I am already scrambling...Excellent images, Joy! But I am already scrambling to look up words I don't know...:DRenee LaTulippehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01312695417155507664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-64440812959101808892015-04-02T13:14:33.618-07:002015-04-02T13:14:33.618-07:00Wow two great lines now. I'm going to have to ...Wow two great lines now. I'm going to have to swat up on my science and geography I think.Catherine Johnsonhttp://catherinemjohnson.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-90737401415103634572015-04-02T11:47:53.811-07:002015-04-02T11:47:53.811-07:00I love the jeweled flecks as well...this is fabulo...I love the jeweled flecks as well...this is fabulous. I agree, Margaret, Here, Here to free verse.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08214389804167241801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-78133344267195814482015-04-02T11:44:34.843-07:002015-04-02T11:44:34.843-07:00Nice! I wonder where she's going!Nice! I wonder where she's going!Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-53252568196836530802015-04-02T10:24:44.981-07:002015-04-02T10:24:44.981-07:00"Jeweled flecks" masterful. I hope this..."Jeweled flecks" masterful. I hope this one goes free verse. I am much more comfortable with that; however, I have never met a poem that didn't stretch me out of my comfort zone. Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-53697208879830061302015-04-02T09:41:01.455-07:002015-04-02T09:41:01.455-07:00I am loving this poem already. I would love to wal...I am loving this poem already. I would love to walk on the delta and feel the sand on my bare feet. Have been taking some time off from my poetry, but miss it. I am trying to devote time during April to enjoy and visit and connect. So looking forward to the twists and turns of the poem this year.<br />Janet F./Janet Clareskanny17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07488350213473016250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-21752413914492371932015-04-02T06:35:27.921-07:002015-04-02T06:35:27.921-07:00love those jeweled flecks of mica--wonderful detai...love those jeweled flecks of mica--wonderful detail.Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-59376964025033379082015-04-02T06:17:04.818-07:002015-04-02T06:17:04.818-07:00Your second line flows beautifully from the first,...Your second line flows beautifully from the first, Joy. I'm loving this poem's carefree tone.Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-53398791017827827162015-04-02T05:57:06.630-07:002015-04-02T05:57:06.630-07:00Such a free spirit adventuring, love the "sho...Such a free spirit adventuring, love the "shoes swung over her shoulder", too, Joy. And off she goes!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-19420073059763281462015-04-02T05:36:02.195-07:002015-04-02T05:36:02.195-07:00I am longing for shoes swung over my shoulder days...I am longing for shoes swung over my shoulder days! Such an image here... What will she do? This is always such a fun ride! Amy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-81300763634198084562015-04-02T04:18:16.278-07:002015-04-02T04:18:16.278-07:00Ah, mica! And those jeweled bare feet! Yes, we'...Ah, mica! And those jeweled bare feet! Yes, we're definitely off the meter-n-rhyme with those long lines. Thank you, Joy! xoIrene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.com