tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post6417323092699701799..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: TWILIGHTJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-34223755121171755572015-05-10T10:25:13.904-07:002015-05-10T10:25:13.904-07:00Your kind words mean a lot to me. Thank you.Your kind words mean a lot to me. Thank you.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-17687000142007624522015-05-10T06:15:41.171-07:002015-05-10T06:15:41.171-07:00I agree with Donna about the unwinding quality in ...I agree with Donna about the unwinding quality in your words and images. Perfect.Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-89491112922670773322015-05-09T10:06:05.525-07:002015-05-09T10:06:05.525-07:00Thanks Michelle. Thanks for hosting us this week ...Thanks Michelle. Thanks for hosting us this week and serving up a five word challenge. Thanks for taking the time to read and understand my poem.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-26814924821573631472015-05-09T10:02:49.668-07:002015-05-09T10:02:49.668-07:00Hey Donna,
Nothing makes a poet's heart sing m...Hey Donna,<br />Nothing makes a poet's heart sing more than someone saying they want to read your poem a second time. Thank you oodles.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-40166928973200791952015-05-09T10:01:12.426-07:002015-05-09T10:01:12.426-07:00Thanks, Jama. The voice of this one is something ...Thanks, Jama. The voice of this one is something different I was trying. I liked the light pushing through clouded glass.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-75066860359791701752015-05-08T13:02:51.849-07:002015-05-08T13:02:51.849-07:00What a gorgeous poem, Joy! I especially liked the ...What a gorgeous poem, Joy! I especially liked the sense of magical realism you've evoked with: "Now is the time/of the clock's unwinding" and "the father/lets the weight of the day slip/from his shoulders, considers how bright/these stars will shine.Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-20439196283656936372015-05-08T10:05:55.815-07:002015-05-08T10:05:55.815-07:00I may just read this again tonight to help with th...I may just read this again tonight to help with the unwinding process. It has such a relaxing quality to it!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-25683607494782869282015-05-08T09:35:07.921-07:002015-05-08T09:35:07.921-07:00Evocative and atmospheric. I can just feel the clo...Evocative and atmospheric. I can just feel the clock's unwinding. I like how you've pulled the reader into this family's life with your telling details. jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859083373087448194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-49566747340833869312015-05-08T09:06:47.105-07:002015-05-08T09:06:47.105-07:00Thanks Linda, the images in this poem were fun to ...Thanks Linda, the images in this poem were fun to build.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-28717220810046560972015-05-08T05:50:24.665-07:002015-05-08T05:50:24.665-07:00Love the lines about the clock's unwinding and...Love the lines about the clock's unwinding and letting the weight of the day slip from Dad's shoulders. Great images! Thanks, Joy.Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.com