tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post4312795898255557794..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: A RONDELETJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-18778347720491276972014-04-26T13:59:58.717-07:002014-04-26T13:59:58.717-07:00Thanks, Mary Lee. You've made me pause to thi...Thanks, Mary Lee. You've made me pause to think about all the poems about Bees, and Barbara Juster Esbensen's book A CELEBRATION OF BEES Helping Children to Write Poetry.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-79679799434056933712014-04-26T13:57:14.031-07:002014-04-26T13:57:14.031-07:00Thank you, Heidi. Yup, I want to work more with t...Thank you, Heidi. Yup, I want to work more with this form. It did what I wanted in that it had a repeating line. Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-34459957981248417152014-04-26T13:55:55.878-07:002014-04-26T13:55:55.878-07:00You are welcome. WOW! I didn't know I was wr...You are welcome. WOW! I didn't know I was writing a mentor poem. Makes me humble.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-13078238283037386192014-04-26T12:13:50.134-07:002014-04-26T12:13:50.134-07:00Thank you for the mentor poem and tribute to bees....Thank you for the mentor poem and tribute to bees.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-80984084085444716202014-04-26T03:57:39.904-07:002014-04-26T03:57:39.904-07:00Need to work more with this one--so musical, so da...Need to work more with this one--so musical, so danceable! Love the bees' pollen stockings, Joy.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16390683254344950352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-79363436848984181422014-04-26T03:41:09.960-07:002014-04-26T03:41:09.960-07:00Three cheers for the bees!Three cheers for the bees!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-90463314475214739692014-04-25T20:54:18.685-07:002014-04-25T20:54:18.685-07:00Ruth, Do some research in books on form and then t...Ruth, Do some research in books on form and then try one of your own. It is a fun form to try. Thanks for stopping by.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-25493333635834113892014-04-25T20:51:45.218-07:002014-04-25T20:51:45.218-07:00You're right Linda. I thought, "What fun...You're right Linda. I thought, "What fun to be a bee in a euphoric stupor." I wanted to be that bee.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-42169336240130323902014-04-25T20:50:19.812-07:002014-04-25T20:50:19.812-07:00Thanks, BJ. You should give the rondelet a try. ...Thanks, BJ. You should give the rondelet a try. It was fun working on it.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-47981176258243357282014-04-25T20:49:08.507-07:002014-04-25T20:49:08.507-07:00Prickly Pear jelly has it's own sweet taste. ...Prickly Pear jelly has it's own sweet taste. I'd send you a jar of my jelly but I've already given away all of last years supply. The syrup is also great for making salad dressing. Let's hope the pears ripen quickly so I can make some more jelly and syrup. Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-91356063832984679372014-04-25T20:45:11.518-07:002014-04-25T20:45:11.518-07:00Thank you, Buffy.Thank you, Buffy.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-44136197334194880482014-04-25T20:44:31.579-07:002014-04-25T20:44:31.579-07:00Thanks, Linda. Hope you have a good weekend.Thanks, Linda. Hope you have a good weekend.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-34262041351511250532014-04-25T18:57:40.794-07:002014-04-25T18:57:40.794-07:00This is a new form to me. Fun!This is a new form to me. Fun!Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-58371055886687680492014-04-25T10:10:17.537-07:002014-04-25T10:10:17.537-07:00Hi Joy,
I want some of those stockings!Hi Joy,<br />I want some of those stockings!Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-59596229004183842652014-04-25T09:56:15.126-07:002014-04-25T09:56:15.126-07:00Very nice, Joy! Each new line adds something wonde...Very nice, Joy! Each new line adds something wonderful! I've never tried this lovely form.BJ Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810656260650783785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-60424211463832794032014-04-25T07:22:33.807-07:002014-04-25T07:22:33.807-07:00What does prickly pear jelly taste like, Joy? I, t...What does prickly pear jelly taste like, Joy? I, too, like the bee's pollen stockings. Also his "golden sleeping." Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-60883644118455946502014-04-25T07:15:22.670-07:002014-04-25T07:15:22.670-07:00Yes, the "pollen stockings rolled to his knee...Yes, the "pollen stockings rolled to his knees" is a wonderful line. Very nice, Joy!Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-75369581219304919592014-04-25T05:28:52.779-07:002014-04-25T05:28:52.779-07:00Hi Joy, I love each part, never thought that the b...Hi Joy, I love each part, never thought that the bees become sluggish! And especially love "pollen stockings rolled to his knees". I do see the pollen covering when I watch.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com