tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post6201623681686101102..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: haiku threeJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-35700882237738100752012-03-22T09:37:18.053-07:002012-03-22T09:37:18.053-07:00I love your dental poem!!! Joy, you are absolutely...I love your dental poem!!! Joy, you are absolutely too much. Can we borrow it? True to my promise of yesterday, I observed on the Atlanta subway this AM and wrote this haiku while waiting for my husband:<br /><br />French drawls, suitcase thumps<br />hip hop blast, teens chat, brakes squeal<br />subways sounds, swoosh around!<br /><br /><br />Not perfect at all-- but fun to write! ANd for me (a non-poet) that counts a lot!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-32961358292086997642012-03-22T06:36:41.360-07:002012-03-22T06:36:41.360-07:00Joy,
Gold on gold spotlighted by gold. Better th...Joy,<br /><br />Gold on gold spotlighted by gold. Better than golden coins.Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-53849380924624216932012-03-21T19:40:34.988-07:002012-03-21T19:40:34.988-07:00Yes, isn't that fun. You'll never be bore...Yes, isn't that fun. You'll never be bored as long as you have a poem you can write. <br /><br />Wait until you see the exercise for tomorrow. I can see your poems now--Three dentists that I once knew....<br />Then you can start on <br />Three clean teeth<br />that I once knew<br />an incisor and a k-9<br />they were two<br />but that one grinding tooth<br />that was in the back<br />that molar ruled<br />with it's chump, chomp, chomp! <br /><br /> Oh dear, I'm getting carried away. Have fun writing.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-68094559243981081162012-03-21T19:17:39.567-07:002012-03-21T19:17:39.567-07:00Sunshine gold. Beautiful! I read this in a library...Sunshine gold. Beautiful! I read this in a library today and briefly thought of writing a haiku about that setting...but my task was to get back to my WIP so I dove in! But tomorrow I'll be at a dental meeting with my husband. I suspect I might be bored...time for a haiku!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.com