tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post6437659086009845388..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: FoodJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-32158746980508108402012-10-14T14:05:38.834-07:002012-10-14T14:05:38.834-07:00Joy,
Glad you liked my suggestion. I meant to ri...Joy,<br /><br />Glad you liked my suggestion. I meant to right "just like" instead of "just" earlier in my first line. Our brains go faster than our fingers. Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04171237290842321435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-2047979807356552582012-10-14T12:45:42.942-07:002012-10-14T12:45:42.942-07:00Linda, I like your suggestion. I might use it. I...Linda, I like your suggestion. I might use it. I actually was thinking of changing that "please" to "with cheese," but "take-out or delivery" slows the line down even more and I like that. I'm mulling.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-84931876879862229932012-10-14T10:22:03.736-07:002012-10-14T10:22:03.736-07:00:) Fun!:) Fun!Carol Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10444182118975929045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-53058409601870694872012-10-14T09:18:37.141-07:002012-10-14T09:18:37.141-07:00Joy,
This was fun. I was wondering if you could te...Joy,<br />This was fun. I was wondering if you could tell about where you eat, just most of the other stanzas do. How about if the last line was removed and replaced with "take out or delivery." If that doesn't do it for you, maybe it will give you an idea.Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04171237290842321435noreply@blogger.com