tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post6563954781862591326..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: The FloorJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-38920799131316949502015-08-03T11:00:06.311-07:002015-08-03T11:00:06.311-07:00Joy,
If I were a floor I would love a drip of ice ...Joy,<br />If I were a floor I would love a drip of ice cream.Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-6000185417376446072015-08-02T11:06:13.831-07:002015-08-02T11:06:13.831-07:00Fresh is always good. Thanks for stopping by and ...Fresh is always good. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment, Tabatha. And thanks for organizing the Summer Poetry Sway for 2015. It is making this a marvelous poetry filled summer. I appreciate you.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-4825896010213098192015-08-02T11:04:37.374-07:002015-08-02T11:04:37.374-07:00Of course your floor is very happy, especially if ...Of course your floor is very happy, especially if you used one of those pleasant pine scented cleaners ;-).Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-26053599457434233812015-08-02T11:03:37.095-07:002015-08-02T11:03:37.095-07:00Bulgy floors, my heavens! Does the floor need a d...Bulgy floors, my heavens! Does the floor need a diet of something other than dirt? Do floors like when ice cream gets dropped? Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-64335564210955631602015-08-02T11:01:42.055-07:002015-08-02T11:01:42.055-07:00I like the dialogue of your new floor. Of course ...I like the dialogue of your new floor. Of course it wants to be a part of the family. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment. I appreciate your reading my poem.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-30137870037675112092015-08-01T14:37:08.605-07:002015-08-01T14:37:08.605-07:00We just had a floor born last week! So your poem s...We just had a floor born last week! So your poem speaks to me as I run around sweeping up dust and grit that didn't used to bother me at all. Maybe the floor is saying, "Keep me new without scratches and mars!" Or I could listen harder and imagine it saying, "I'm so glad I'm here. I don't want to be a bother. Just let me be a part of the family."Joyce Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02905709719444916488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-42715263925930057752015-08-01T09:11:18.437-07:002015-08-01T09:11:18.437-07:00Joy,
Fun! You know those bulges in some floors? ...Joy,<br />Fun! You know those bulges in some floors? Wonder if they could be caused from people sweeping dirt in cracks or maybe the floor lifting up to try to clean itself. Hmmm.... My refrigerator would probably ask me if I can read. Sometimes I put vegetables in the meat bin. :)Linda A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16517546647672781332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-50646142998684071742015-07-31T15:17:55.867-07:002015-07-31T15:17:55.867-07:00Ha, Joy, I just spent some time cleaning my floor,...Ha, Joy, I just spent some time cleaning my floor, so I hope it's happier than it was. It is fun to imagine what all those things might say. Looking at POV is always fun.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-71935545203086053082015-07-31T12:36:30.889-07:002015-07-31T12:36:30.889-07:00I like your nonsense, Joy! It's turn-things-up...I like your nonsense, Joy! It's turn-things-upside-down-and-look-at-them-fresh. Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.com