tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post7402499300476292785..comments2024-01-19T01:07:34.538-08:00Comments on Poetry for Kids Joy: Licorice StickJoyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-43122576418388006912012-10-06T04:40:52.577-07:002012-10-06T04:40:52.577-07:00I had fun looking at all of your music poems, Joy!...I had fun looking at all of your music poems, Joy! Music is one of my favorite things to write about. It's obvious that you had fun writing them. :-) Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-30096793300260627522012-10-05T19:45:25.643-07:002012-10-05T19:45:25.643-07:00Thanks Laura.
I did spend a lot of time thinking...Thanks Laura.<br /> I did spend a lot of time thinking about, what does that sound like. And, How can I describe that sound. all part of the fun of writing poetry. I think that is why I didn't like Wed.'s poem on the piano. It still needs lots of work.Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01825251724115541708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-84061751510692455862012-10-05T14:48:38.622-07:002012-10-05T14:48:38.622-07:00I like the note splitting the air and then lingeri...I like the note splitting the air and then lingering. Lovely!laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-37607238915149457352012-10-05T13:27:17.469-07:002012-10-05T13:27:17.469-07:00Hi Joy,
I have had SO many experiences researchin...Hi Joy,<br /><br />I have had SO many experiences researching things that don't ultimately end up in my work... it's so worth it though! You're right, you do need to know everything, even when you don't include it. The poem is so authentic because of it. Not to mention lovely! You remind me of Langston Hughes, one of my favorites on music!<br />Love,<br />JewellJewell Parker Rhodeshttp://laneshasays.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4114341568105527452.post-58200591777573121132012-10-05T12:28:29.606-07:002012-10-05T12:28:29.606-07:00Joy,
So the rule is no information dumps, especial...Joy,<br />So the rule is no information dumps, especially in poetry that has so few words to deliver. Got it!golfpinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764020142113565408noreply@blogger.com