coyotes yipping
desert winds erase all tracks
an elf owl calls--why
I don't normally like to use a center margin with my poems. It seems a little too easy. But in this haiku I felt the need to use it to represent the centering, or pulling toward the center of all beings--we are all related. Each thing we do has an effect upon all others. I thought I could use the center margin to help show this.
This poem was fun because I had to do a little research. We're having a bit of wind tonight, so the yipping voices of the coyote are carrying across the canyon. I have been reading the GAURDIANS OF GA'HOOLE by Katherine Laski, and I knew I wanted to include an owl watching the coyotes from his burrow in a Saguaro. I had originally used the traditional owl sound who as the last word of this poem. But when I looked the bird up in my PETERSON FIELD GUIDES, Western Birds, text and illustrations by Roger Tory Peterson; the listing for the elf owl, Micrathene whitneyi, says the voice is "A rapid, high pitched whi- whi-whi-whi...often becoming more yipping or 'puppy-like,'" (Wow, I didn't think I'd ever have use for that single quote followed by the double quote, but there it is.) So then I knew I had the bird I had heard and the one I wanted in this poem and I had to change the who to the why which makes the poem so much richer in conveying the meaning I wanted with this poem. Oh, this was fun.
This poem includes the word "tracks" which is the challenge word for this month at children's poet David L. Harrison's blog. So I will post this poem over there too. If you write your own poem, Harrison has a monthly challenge for adults and two categories for children. The children poems are at http://davidlharrison.wordpress.com/young-poets-word-of-the-month-poems/
and the adult poems are at http://davidlharrison.wordpress.com/adult-word-of-the-month-poem/
So here is the writing exercise for today, write your own haiku, or a poem about "tracks." Share your poem with me in the comments below or post it on Harrison's blog.
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