I'm still not back in gear. I've been trying to get my desk cleared today so I can get down to some serious work.So while I was cleaning I saw a note about the SHADORMA, a six line poems, that may have originated in Spain. This is a syllabic form with three syllables in the first line
five in the second, then three, three, seven syllables in the fifth line, and ending with five syllables in the last line.
Or, 1= XXX
2= XXXXX
3= XXX
4= XXX
5= XXXXXXX
6= XXXXX
Our New Year
for 2-0-1-4
happiness
poetry
with peace and blessings to you.
May this be your year.
Your challenge for today is to try writing your own Shadorma. Have fun writing.
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This is my playground for poetry written for children with ideas and inspiration for writing your own poems. Come on in. Sit for a spell, have a cup of words to swirl around and make your own cup of poetry. I'm so glad you are here. I hope you'll find the Kingdom of Poetry a fun place to be.
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Thursday, January 2, 2014
Tuesday, August 28, 2012
FORM POEM
LITTLE YELLOW FROG
Little yellow frog,
Little yellow frog,
Where have you been?
I've been hiding,
I've been hiding,
said little yellow frog,
under a log.
LITTLE RED HEN
Little red hen,
Little red hen,
Where have you been?
I've been sitting,
I've been sitting,
said little red hen,
trying to hatch these eggs.
Can you see the pattern I've set up in these two poems?
Little (color) (animal).
Little (color) (animal),
Where have you been?
I've been (action word),
I've been (action word),
said the little (color) (animal)
(line to explain where or what the action is)
So let's try it with a cat.
Little white cat,
Little white cat,
Where have you been?
I've been sleeping,
I've been sleeping,
said little white cat,
on this cozy mat.
Or a dog.
Little brown dog,
Little brown dog,
Where have you been?
I've been running,
I've been running,
said the little brown dog,
through this misty fog.
I'm already thinking about the verses I can write using this pattern with a goat, a lion, an ostrich, the moon, (see, it doesn't have to be an animal), the broom, even a Texas tycoon. Just to show you the form can be used for something other than animals, I wanted to use different colors too. So I thought about silver and the first thing that came to mind was a shovel.
Little silver shovel,
Little silver shovel,
Where have you been?
I've been digging,
I've been digging,
said little silver shovel
all across the gravel.
So now it is your turn. Can you write your own poem using this form? If you had a whole group of poems you could put them together in your own little book of poetry. Have fun. If you'd like to leave your poem in the comments below, I'd LOVE to read your creation. Thank you.
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