My manticore is
a Tri-le-key.
He has a triangle head,
the body of an eagle
and the feet and tail
of a monkey.
Who says a trilekey
can't be a regular guy.
With eagle wings,
he can soar and fly.
He eats snakes,
he spies on the ground,
and when he sees one
he makes a monkey sound.
hu, hu, hu.
That is the last of the manticores poems I wrote with the second grade students at Kapa'a Elementary School. I was re-reading the Afterword, X. J. Kennedy wrote for the 35th Anniversary Edition of THE REASON FOR THE PELICAN by John Ciardi. He mentions the made up characters of Lewis Carroll, and Edward Lear, and the Bugle-Billed Bazoo, the Brobinyak and the Saginsack of Ciardi. These silly characters opened the door to Shel Silverstein and Jack Prelutsky to add their own wacky characters. Great fun to trace your silly poetry character ancestry back in history. So your challenge for today is to make up your own imaginary character and let us know what it does. Yesterday, on A Writer's Playground, in her blog post Linda Andersen wrote about socks getting lost in the dryer. Now there is a great monster I'd like to know. One that picks your socks off the floor and eats them. What would you call such a monster? Write your poem. Have fun.
The one who asks questions doesn't lose his way. African proverb
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Saturday, April 23, 2016
Wednesday, April 20, 2016
Manticore V
My manticore is a gho-che-at.
He has the head of a ghost,
the feet of a cheetah,
and the body of a very scared cat.
He runs fast outdoors
with his cheetah feet
hunting for fish and souls
to eat.
He wears a Hawaiian lei
to say Aloha
every day.
Who ever would have thought to put the head of a ghost on a manticore? Only the children from Kapa'a Elementary School. I think this came from the idea that a manticore is a mythical beast. Isn't the creativity wonderful? And then to follow through with the idea that a ghost eats souls. Some thinking is going on. Wonderful! I've never had a manticore poem go in this direction before and I love it. Bright and very creative.
Can you try writing a manticore poem today? Maybe you can get your friends to help by suggesting interesting shapes to patch together. Don't forget to try to use your five senses when writing your poem.
Seek new paths for your creativity.
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