Follow what you love.
It will take you where you need to go.
Notice every mourning dove
To follow what you love.
Look to the stars above
To show you what they know.
Follow what you love.
It will take you where you need to go.
I'm working with another form this week--the Triolet, a French form. (Pronounced TREE-o-lay) This is an 8 line form with two end rhymes.
The first line is repeated again in the fourth and seventh lines. Then all you need is two other lines --the third and fifth--to rhyme with the end word of the first line.
The second line is repeated as the eighth line, and line six needs to rhyme with this.
So if I made a chart for the triolet, it would look like this:
Line 1. A1
Line 2. B1
Line 3. A
Line 4. A1
Line 5. A
Line 6. B
Line 7. A1
Line 8. B1
With all the repetition, this is a fairly easy poem to write. My problem is always finding the right first two lines. So, I took a quotation from Natalie Goldberg, "Follow what you love, and it will take you where you need to go."
Just for fun, let me see if I can do this again with another quotation, this time from Mother Teresa.
It is not how much we do,
But how much love we put into doing.
Everything we work through,
It is not how much we do
That creates a life that's true.
Work is not what keeps us going
It is not how much we do,
But how much love we put into doing.
Hmmm, I think that one is a success too. Both of these quotes came from a deck of cards
SWEET DREAMS: 36 Bedtime Wishes by Cooper Edens and Sheryl Abrams, published by Chronicle Books. These cards are designed to be left on a child's pillow at bed time.
Your challenge this week is to try writing your own triolet. You are welcome to leave your poem in the comments. Have fun trying this form.
Poetry Friday is hosted by
TeacherDance this week. Linda, thank you for hosting.
As an extra bonus you might like to try writing a Valentine for your favorite book character. See yesterday's Valentine post.