I've got two fists of stars
and bright moonlight, it's true,
a wispy cloud to float
across the sky, deep blue.
I've put them in this box.
I'm sending it to you
to help you with your dreams.
I hope you have a few.
Please, close your eyes to sleep
and fill your head with memories.
So then when you awake
you'll send your thoughts to me.
WOW! This poem is definitely a draft. If you'd like to try re-writing the last stanza so the meter and rhyme are better, please do. In the meantime, I'll file this one away to think on some more. What are you thinking about today? Did you learn something new? Can you write a poem about that? Have fun writing.
Good draft... Are we drawing stars or boxes? ILY. Cloey
ReplyDeleteHow about both. I'd love to see your drawing.
DeleteI love the dreaminess of this :)
ReplyDeleteHey Catherine,
DeleteThanks for stopping by. How is your summer going?
Sweet, Joy!
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