Yellow and orange hibiscus ,
green fields and mountains,
anthurium and red ti leaves,
brown monk seals and plovers,
blue waves and blue, blue sky,
white clouds in the wind,
egrets winging by,
a rainbow necklace overhead
making a strong people--
all the races, blended together,
here in Hawaii,
the land where all colors
call it home.
Aloha.
* From a line, All colors blended together, suggested by Clo Ann Smith. This free verse poem is the result of her suggestion. Can you try writing your own free verse poem about where you live? Can you include at least one simile? Have fun writing today.
What pictures does this poem make you think about?
Ho-ne-ho-ne: adj. Playing tricks, teasing, fretting; not letting one alone.
A human being is nothing but a story with a skin around it. Fred Allen
Joy,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful poetry challenge! I love your use of rainbow necklace, and egrets winging by. Lovely! I also liked the ho-ne explanation and Fred Allen's quote. So much in a tiny package. You pack it in. Well done as always!
Thank you, Linda. I was just reading some old notes from my mother on being a "doing" person as opposed to a "being" person. I'm just trying to "do" poetry and make it fun for kids.
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