There is a river
I skate upon
in my dreams
from dusk until dawn.
Oh the adventures,
skating near and far
and when I'm tired
I rest on a star.
What do you dream about? Your dreams can take you anywhere. Can you write your own dream poem today? Make it fun.
This is beautiful, Joy! I will try one today!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Becky. Yes, do have fun writing and I hope you'll share your creation.
ReplyDeleteI have tried twice today to post, but my comments seem to disappear. I think your poem is lovely. I have a dream poem I'm working on polishing, but am reluctant to post it on line. I wonder if that hurts my chances of placing that poem for publication later.
ReplyDeleteRosi, Sorry you've had trouble posting. Yes, I understand your concern. Is a blog post considered "published," or not? That is the reason you see a lot of my draft poems and I can always remove poems from my blog if I sell them somewhere else. I always feel that there are a lot more poems to come so I don't need to hold tightly to them.
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